Tuesday, July 29, 2008

lost again....

A fragile mind
seems to have lost its way again
no matter what it tries to find
all that's found is in vain
Perplexed and shaken
yet, it fights the pain
misunderstood and mistaken
but not yet insane
charred and burnt
remanants of a cremated heart remain....

3 comments:

Ankur said...

the heart sings
on the beat of the rain
not so good
yet not insane
the striking lights
the thundering clouds
make me shiver
and feel the pain
somehow i try
to know myself
i look in the heart
the love remains
burnt and charred
broken into pieces
the heart still beats
the love remains...

when i read some amazing lines, i always try to sing something with it... i hope u dont mind my few lines here! :)

ur poem is beautiful!! :)

Kamalzz said...

:p

Ankur said...

didnt know i write so bad!

thanks! :P